📝 题目
Some people believe that governments should invest heavily in space exploration and colonising other planets, while others argue that resources should be directed towards solving problems on Earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
有人认为政府应该大力投资太空探索和殖民其他星球,而另一些人认为资源应该用于解决地球上的问题。讨论两种观点并给出你的看法。
✍️ 满分范文
The prospect of establishing a human colony on Mars has captivated the public imagination and attracted unprecedented private investment. Yet this vision sits uneasily alongside the litany of unresolved crises afflicting our own planet. While I acknowledge the scientific value of space exploration, I contend that in an era of escalating ecological and social emergencies, the colonisation of other worlds should remain a long-term aspiration rather than an immediate fiscal priority.
中文翻译:在火星建立人类殖民地的前景已吸引了公众的想象力和前所未有的私人投资。然而这一愿景与我们星球自身一系列未解决的危机并列时显得不安。虽然我承认太空探索的科学价值,但我主张,在生态和社会紧急状况不断升级的时代,殖民其他世界应该保持为长期愿景而非当务之急的财政优先事项。
开头段用 'captivated...yet...' 制造张力——一方面是令人兴奋的前景,另一方面是未解决的地球危机。'sits uneasily alongside' 是极为精妙的表达——sits uneasily='不安地并列',暗示两者之间的道德冲突。litany 原意是'礼拜仪式中的应答祈祷',引申为'一连串(令人不快的事)',比 'list' 或 'series' 有了感情色彩。最后一句用 'I acknowledge...I contend...' 的对比结构亮明立场:承认价值但反对优先。'long-term aspiration rather than immediate fiscal priority' 的对比干净利落。
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litany
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The case for space colonisation extends beyond mere adventure. Proponents advance several substantive arguments. First, becoming a multi-planetary species would serve as an insurance policy against existential threats — asteroid impacts, nuclear war, or runaway climate collapse — that could render Earth uninhabitable. Second, space programmes have historically generated transformative spin-off technologies, including satellite communications, GPS, and water purification systems, yielding returns that far exceed the initial investment. Third, the existential fragility of confining humanity to a single planet is, in itself, a compelling rationale for diversification. As Elon Musk has argued, staying on one planet is akin to keeping all of humanity's eggs in a single basket.
中文翻译:支持太空殖民的论据远不止冒险。支持者提出了几个实质性论点。第一,成为多行星物种将作为抵御生存威胁——小行星撞击、核战争或失控的气候崩溃——的保险政策,这些威胁可能使地球不宜居住。第二,太空项目历史上产生了变革性的衍生技术,包括卫星通信、GPS和水净化系统,回报远超初始投资。第三,将人类限制在单一星球的生存脆弱性本身就是多元化的有力理由。正如埃隆·马斯克所说,停留在一个星球上类似于把全人类的鸡蛋放在一个篮子里。
讨论类作文的让步段需要充分展开对方观点。本段用三个层次论证:生存保险、技术衍生、脆弱性论点。'insurance policy against existential threats' 中的 insurance policy 是一个极好的隐喻——把太空殖民比作'保险'。spin-off technologies 是太空政策讨论中的标准术语。'akin to keeping all of humanity's eggs in a single basket' 引用马斯克的话并用了 'eggs in one basket' 这个习语的升级版——加上 'all of humanity's' 让一个老套的习语变得有分量。substantive 比 'real/important' 高级得多。
substantive
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existential threats
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生存威胁
spin-off technologies
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衍生技术
compelling rationale
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有力理由
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类似于
Nevertheless, the opportunity costs of massive space investment are staggering. The estimated budget for a single crewed Mars mission exceeds five hundred billion dollars — a sum that could eradicate malaria, provide clean water to every human being, or transition entire economies to renewable energy. The moral calculus becomes difficult to defend when millions of children still die from preventable diseases and a quarter of humanity lacks access to basic sanitation. Furthermore, the 'insurance policy' argument contains a dangerous fallacy: it implies that Earth is ultimately doomed and that our best hope lies elsewhere, thereby justifying continued environmental neglect. The psychological effect of normalising space colonisation as an escape hatch may actually weaken the political will to address terrestrial crises with the urgency they demand.
中文翻译:然而,大规模太空投资的机会成本是惊人的。单次载人火星任务的预估预算超过五千亿美元——这笔资金可以根除疟疾、为每个人提供清洁水源、或将整个经济体转型为可再生能源。当数百万儿童仍死于可预防的疾病、四分之一的人类缺乏基本卫生设施时,这种道德计算变得难以辩护。此外,'保险政策'论点包含一个危险的谬误:它暗示地球最终注定毁灭,我们最大的希望在别处,从而为持续的环境忽视提供了正当性。将太空殖民正常化为逃生舱的心理效应可能实际上削弱了以所需紧迫性解决地球危机的政治意愿。
主论段从两个角度反驳:机会成本和道德谬误。'staggering' 比 'very large' 有冲击力得多。用具体数字(五千亿)对比具体用途(疟疾、清洁水、可再生能源)是最有说服力的论证方式。'moral calculus' 是一个精妙的搭配——把道德选择比作'计算',暗示'算不过来'。'escape hatch' 原意是'逃生舱口',用在这里极为形象——暗示太空殖民被当成'逃离地球'的后门。最后一句的逻辑深刻:不是太空探索本身有害,而是'将其正常化为逃生选项'会削弱解决地球问题的紧迫感——这个二阶论证体现了9分作文的思辨深度。
opportunity costs
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机会成本
staggering
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惊人的
moral calculus
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道德计算
fallacy
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谬误
escape hatch
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逃生舱
In conclusion, while space exploration holds undeniable scientific value and the long-term dream of multi-planetary habitation should not be abandoned, the present moment demands a recalibration of priorities. The most pressing frontier is not Mars but the fragile biosphere we already inhabit. Investing in Earth's preservation is not a retreat from ambition — it is the most profound expression of it.
中文翻译:总之,虽然太空探索具有不可否认的科学价值,多行星居住的长期梦想也不应被放弃,但当前时刻需要重新校准优先事项。最紧迫的前沿不是火星而是我们已经居住的脆弱生物圈。投资于地球的保护不是对雄心的退却——而是它最深刻的表达。
结论段三句话,层层递进。第一句让步+立场。第二句是核心判断:'The most pressing frontier is not Mars but the fragile biosphere we already inhabit.' 把 frontier 一词从太空语境拉回地球语境——frontier 原指'边疆/前沿',在太空讨论中常指'太空前沿',这里巧妙地把它重新定义为'地球自身的生态前沿'。第三句是金句:'Investing in Earth's preservation is not a retreat from ambition — it is the most profound expression of it.' 用破折号制造转折,retreat from ambition 和 profound expression of it 形成完美对仗——保护地球不是放弃雄心,而是雄心最深刻的体现。这种'重新定义'式结尾是9分作文的标志。
recalibration
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重新校准
pressing frontier
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紧迫前沿
retreat from ambition
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对雄心的退却
profound
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深刻的