📝 题目
The table below provides information about population size and Gross Domestic Product (GDP) for five countries in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
📊 图表内容说明
表格展示五国2020年数据:Country A人口1.4B/GDP$14T(均第一);Country B人口1.3B/GDP$2.8T;Country C人口330M/GDP$21T(GDP第一,人口第三);Country D人口67M/GDP$2.7T;Country E人口50M/GDP$1.6T(均最小)。
✍️ 满分范文
The table provides information about the population and GDP of five countries in 2020.
简洁改写题目,一句话完成。
Overall, Country A had by far the largest population, while Country C had the highest GDP despite ranking third in population. Country E had the smallest figures in both categories. There was a clear divergence between population size and economic output among the five nations.
三个关键发现:①人口最多vs GDP最高分属不同国家 ②Country E双项最小 ③人口与经济产出之间存在分化。特别注意指出'divergence'——这是高分特征。
Country A stood out with a population of 1.4 billion and a GDP of $14 trillion. Although Country B had a comparable population of 1.3 billion, its GDP was only $2.8 trillion — roughly a fifth of Country A's. Country C, with a significantly smaller population of 330 million, generated the highest GDP at $21 trillion, exceeding Country A's by 50%.
聚焦前三强国。用although引导让步从句(Country B人口大但GDP小),用'exceeding... by 50%'做精确比较。突出Country C以小人口创造最大GDP。
Country D and Country E had relatively modest populations of 67 million and 50 million respectively. Their GDPs were also the smallest among the five: $2.7 trillion for Country D and $1.6 trillion for Country E. Notably, Country C's GDP per capita was the highest by a wide margin, while Country B's was among the lowest despite its large population.
描述后两国。末句引出人均GDP概念(GDP per capita),超越表格原始数据做推论分析——这是Band 9的批判性思维体现。
📚 核心词汇
by far (远超)
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强调差距
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divergence (分化/差异)
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高级分析词
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comparable (可比的/相当的)
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精确比较
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generated (产生)
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替换had/made
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exceeding (超过)
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比较级表达
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modest (适度的/不大的)
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替换small
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by a wide margin (大幅领先)
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程度强调
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🏆 高分句型
had by far the largest population
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强调领先优势明显,by far修饰最高级加强语气。适合在概述段点出最突出数据。可替换:was the most populous by a significant margin.
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despite ranking third in population
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表示让步转折,despite后接动名词短语使句子简洁正式。用于呈现反差点。可替换:even though it ranked third in population.
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a clear divergence between... and...
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用名词divergence概括两组数据的差异,引出后续对比。比different更高级。可替换:a striking contrast between... and...
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stood out with a population of
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stood out意为“突出”,with引出具体数值,简洁有力地强调某一项特别醒目。可替换:was notable for its population of.
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roughly a fifth of
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表示“大约五分之一”,用于描述比例时既精确又留有余地。roughly体现数据近似。可替换:approximately one-fifth of.
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exceeding Country A's by 50%
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用现在分词exceeding作伴随状语,使句子紧凑且逻辑清晰,适合描述倍数或差值。可替换:50% higher than Country A's.
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the highest by a wide margin
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强调最高值远超其他,by a wide margin表示差距很大,增强说服力。可替换:easily the highest.
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