旅游业收入与游客数量 (2015-2019)

📝 题目

The line graph shows the annual tourism revenue and the bar chart shows the number of visitors to a country from 2015 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

📊 图表内容说明

混合图：线图展示旅游收入从$20B(2015)升至$35B(2019)，2018年略有回落；柱状图展示游客数量从8M(2015)升至14M(2019)，逐年递增。

✍️ 满分范文

主体段 1

The line graph illustrates annual tourism revenue, while the bar chart shows visitor numbers, for a single country over a five-year period from 2015 to 2019.

用while连接两个图表的描述，一句话概括两图内容。

主体段 2

Overall, both tourism revenue and visitor numbers increased over the period, though revenue growth was less consistent. The number of visitors rose steadily each year, whereas revenue experienced a slight dip in 2018 before recovering in 2019.

概括两图共同趋势（均增长）和差异（收入增长不如人数稳定）。指出2018年收入回落——概括段不引用具体数据。

主体段 3

Visitor numbers grew from 8 million in 2015 to 14 million in 2019, an increase of 75%. The growth was relatively even, with approximately 1.5 million additional visitors each year. By contrast, tourism revenue showed greater fluctuation. It rose from $20 billion in 2015 to $33 billion in 2017, before dipping slightly to $31 billion in 2018, and then surging to $35 billion in 2019.

先描述柱状图（游客数量），给出总计增幅75%。用By contrast转入线图描述，按时间顺序展开收入变化，使用rose/dipping/surging等多样化动词。

主体段 4

An interesting observation is that although visitor numbers increased by roughly 1.5 million between 2017 and 2018, revenue actually declined, suggesting that visitors in 2018 spent less on average. However, the following year saw both metrics reach their highest points, indicating a strong recovery in the tourism sector.

深度分析：指出2018年人数增但收入降的矛盾现象，做出合理推论（人均消费下降）。末句总结2019年双双创新高——这是Band 9的跨图表关联分析能力。

📚 核心词汇

fluctuation (波动) · 描述不稳定变化 ☆ dip (小幅下降) · 替换decrease ☆ surging (激增) · 描述快速上升 ☆ metrics (指标) · 替换figures/numbers ☆ relatively even (相对均匀) · 描述增长分布 ☆ less consistent (不够稳定) · 对比描述 ☆

🏆 高分句型

though revenue growth was less consistent → 用于表达让步关系，指出整体趋势中的例外，使描述更严谨。可替换为“although revenue growth was less consistent”。 ☆

rose steadily each year → 描述数据持续上升，动词rose加副词steadily，突出变化特征。可替换为“increased gradually each year”或“grew consistently” ☆

experienced a slight dip → 用experienced搭配a slight dip，生动表达小幅下降，避免单调使用decreased。可替换为“saw a minor drop”或“underwent a small decline” ☆

an increase of 75% → 用同位语结构补充具体增量，使数据变化更直观。可替换为“which was an increase of 75%”或“a rise of 75%” ☆

an interesting observation is that → 引出重要发现或细节，吸引读者注意，适合在段落中强调关键信息。可替换为“it is noteworthy that”或“a notable point is that” ☆

suggesting that visitors spent less on average → 使用现在分词作状语，解释数据背后原因，使分析更有逻辑。可替换为“which suggests that visitors spent less on average” ☆

indicating a strong recovery → 用现在分词短语补充结果，说明数据回升且势头强劲。可替换为“which indicates a strong recovery”或“pointing to a robust rebound” ☆

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