纸张回收流程 - 智能英语陪练

📝 题目

The diagram below shows how used paper is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

📊 图表内容说明

流程图展示纸张回收六阶段：①收集废纸→②分拣去杂质→③加水搅碎成纸浆→④去除油墨(脱墨)→⑤漂白处理→⑥压制成型→切成新纸品出厂。

✍️ 满分范文

主体段 1

The diagram illustrates the process by which used paper is recycled into new paper products.

简洁改写：how used paper is recycled→the process by which used paper is recycled。

主体段 2

Overall, the recycling process comprises six main stages, beginning with the collection of waste paper and concluding with the production of new paper. It is a linear manufacturing process in which waste paper is transformed into reusable material through sorting, pulping, de-inking, and bleaching.

三个要素：①六个阶段 ②起点(收集)终点(新纸) ③类型(linear)。列出关键工艺名称(sorting/pulping/de-inking/bleaching)展示对流程的理解。

主体段 3

First, used paper is collected from homes and businesses and transported to a recycling facility. At the facility, the paper is sorted by type, and any contaminants such as plastic or metal are removed. The sorted paper is then placed in a large tank with water and mechanically agitated to break it down into fibres, forming a substance known as pulp.

描述前三个阶段。全程被动：is collected, is sorted, are removed, is placed。用and连接并行动作，用to break it down表达目的。'a substance known as pulp'是定义新术语的方式。

主体段 4

Next, the pulp undergoes a de-inking process, during which chemicals are added to remove ink and adhesives. The cleaned pulp is then bleached to improve its whiteness. Finally, the treated pulp is pressed flat, dried, and cut into sheets of new paper, which are then rolled and dispatched for commercial use.

描述后三个阶段。用Next/during which/then/Finally串联。'undergoes a de-inking process'用名词化结构提升正式度。末句完整描述最终成型到出厂的过程。

📚 核心词汇

comprises (包含) · 替换consists of ☆ contaminants (杂质/污染物) · 替换impurities ☆ agitated (搅动) · 工艺动词 ☆ pulp (纸浆) · 术语 ☆ de-inking (脱墨) · 专业术语 ☆ dispatched (发送/出货) · 替换sent ☆

🏆 高分句型

comprises six main stages → 用于总述流程包含几个步骤，以总数统领全段，比has或contains更正式，可替换为consists of、is made up of。 ☆

beginning with... and concluding with... → 引出流程的起点和终点，结构对称清晰，适合描述线性过程，可替换为starting from... and ending with...。 ☆

transformed into reusable material → 强调原材料经过加工后的变化结果，突出转化关系，可替换为converted into、changed into。 ☆

sorted by type → 表示按类别分类，用被动语态突出动作对象，适用于流程图中对分拣步骤的描述，可替换为categorized by type。 ☆

mechanically agitated to break it down → 用被动语态加不定式表目的，说明机械搅拌的用途，动词agitate精准且正式，可替换为stirred、mixed。 ☆

undergoes a de-inking process → 用undergo表示经历某过程，比pass through更正式，强调被动接受处理，可替换为is subjected to。 ☆

rolled and dispatched for commercial use → 用被动语态描述最终产品状态，rolled and dispatched并列简洁，可替换为packaged and sent for commercial distribution。 ☆

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