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📝 题目
The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
📊 图表内容说明

流程图展示水泥生产过程:①石灰石和粘土被碾压粉碎→②混合→③送入回转窑加热至1400-1500°C→④冷却→⑤研磨成细粉→⑥加入石膏→⑦装袋。图中有破碎机/混合器/回转窑/冷却器/研磨机等设备。

✍️ 满分范文
主体段 1
The diagram illustrates the stages and equipment involved in the production of cement.
改写题目:stages and equipment used→stages and equipment involved in。
主体段 2
Overall, the cement-making process is a linear manufacturing procedure consisting of six main stages, from the initial crushing of raw materials to the final packaging of the finished cement powder. The process involves both physical and chemical transformations, with the high-temperature kiln stage being the most critical.
三个要素:①六阶段 ②线性流程 ③起点终点。特别指出'both physical and chemical transformations'——识别物理变化(粉碎/研磨)和化学变化(高温烧制)的区别是高分分析。
主体段 3
First, limestone and clay are crushed by a crusher to form a fine powder. This powder is then thoroughly mixed before being fed into a rotating kiln. Inside the kiln, the mixture is heated to a temperature of between 1,400 and 1,500 degrees Celsius, which transforms it into small, hard nodules known as clinker.
描述前三个阶段(破碎→混合→烧制)。全程被动。具体温度(1400-1500°C)体现精度。'which transforms it into...clinker'用定语从句说明化学变化——引入专业术语clinker。
主体段 4
Once the clinker has cooled in a cooling chamber, it is ground by a rotating mill into an extremely fine powder. A small amount of gypsum is then added to this powder to regulate the setting time of the cement. Finally, the finished cement is bagged and made ready for distribution to construction sites.
描述后三个阶段(冷却→研磨→包装)。用Once the clinker has cooled建立时间依存关系。'to regulate the setting time'说明添加石膏的目的——图表中通常不会显示目的,这是合理推断。
📚 核心词汇
crushed (碾压) · 工艺动词 ☆ rotating kiln (回转窑) · 专业术语 ☆ clinker (熟料) · 水泥专业术语 ☆ nodules (小球/团块) · 描述形状 ☆ ground (研磨,grind的过去分词) · 工艺动词 ☆ gypsum (石膏) · 术语 ☆
🏆 高分句型
a linear manufacturing procedure → 用于流程开头概述,点明流程呈线性。使用抽象名词短语提升概括性,可替换为a sequential production process。 ☆
from the initial crushing of... to the final packaging of... → 用from...to...清晰覆盖流程起点和终点,结构对称,适合描述首尾环节,可替换为starting with...and ending with...。 ☆
both physical and chemical transformations → 用both...and...指出过程中包含两类变化,使描述更全面,可替换为physical as well as chemical changes。 ☆
fed into a rotating kiln → 用被动语态准确表达材料被送入设备,fed into生动形象,可替换为transferred into。 ☆
heated to a temperature of between... and... → 使用被动语态和between...and...说明温度范围,体现科技写作的精确性,可替换为ranging from...to...。 ☆
regulate the setting time → regulate准确表达“调节”,常用在工艺说明中表目的,可替换为control,简洁专业。 ☆
made ready for distribution → 用被动语态概括成品待分发状态,简洁地道,可替换为prepared for shipping。 ☆
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