📝 题目
The maps below show the village of Meadowbrook in 1990 and in 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
📊 图表内容说明
两幅地图对比Meadowbrook村庄1990与2025年变化。1990年：北部农田、南部小村舍群、一条东西向主路、东部小学校。2025年：农田被住宅区取代、主路拓宽并新增环岛、学校扩建、南部新建超市和诊所、新增南北向支路。
✍️ 满分范文
主体段 1
The two maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in the village of Meadowbrook over a thirty-five-year period from 1990 to 2025.
改写题目：changes that have taken place→说明是变化对比类地图。
主体段 2
Overall, the village has undergone significant transformation from a small rural settlement into a more developed residential area. The most notable changes include the replacement of farmland with housing, the expansion of road infrastructure, and the addition of community facilities.
三个关键特征：①整体转变方向(rural→residential) ②三大变化类别(住宅替代农田/道路扩建/社区设施)。不引用具体位置信息。
主体段 3
In 1990, Meadowbrook was a small village characterised by open farmland to the north and a modest cluster of houses to the south, connected by a single main road running east to west. A small primary school was located in the eastern part of the village.
描述1990年基线状态。按方位组织(北部农田/南部住宅/主路/东部学校)。使用'characterised by'和'connected by'做空间关系描述——为下段变化做铺垫。
主体段 4
By 2025, the farmland in the north had been entirely replaced by a large residential estate. The original main road had been widened and a roundabout had been constructed at its centre. To the south, several new amenities had been added: a supermarket was built adjacent to the housing area, and a medical clinic was established to the east of the school, which itself had been expanded with new buildings. Additionally, a new north-south road was constructed to connect the new housing estate to the main road.
描述2025年变化，按方位对应描述。全程过去完成时被动(had been replaced/had been widened/had been constructed)。用冒号列举新增设施。'adjacent to'/'to the east of'展示方位语言。
📚 核心词汇
transformation (转变)
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替换change
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residential estate (住宅区)
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替换housing area
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amenities (设施)
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替换facilities
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adjacent to (毗邻)
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方位表达
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roundabout (环岛)
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道路术语
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established (建立)
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替换built
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🏆 高分句型
undergone significant transformation
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用于总体概括变化程度，比change more正式。亮点是动词undergo+形容词+名词的搭配。可替换为experienced dramatic changes或witnessed considerable development。
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from a small rural settlement into a more developed residential area
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用于描述发展方向的转变，形成鲜明对比。亮点是from...into...结构。可替换为transformed from...to...或evolved from...into...
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characterised by open farmland
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用于描述过去状态，引出背景信息。亮点是过去分词短语作后置定语，相当于which was characterised by。可替换为featured或known for。
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entirely replaced by a large residential estate
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用于强调变化彻底，突出新旧对比。亮点是被动语态+by短语，entirely加强语气。可替换为completely replaced by或gave way to。
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had been constructed at its centre
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用于说明新增设施的位置，体现规划布局。亮点是过去完成时，强调在参照时间前已完成。可替换为had been built或had stood。
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adjacent to the housing area
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用于描述空间相邻关系，使方位清晰。亮点是形容词短语作状语，相当于which was adjacent to。可替换为next to或bordering。
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expanded with new buildings
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用于说明原有建筑的扩建，体现发展特征。亮点是过去分词短语作后置定语。可替换为extended with或enlarged by adding。
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