度假岛屿开发前后对比 - 智能英语陪练

📝 题目

The maps below show an island before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

📊 图表内容说明

两幅地图对比岛屿开发前后。开发前：原始荒岛，中央有森林，周围沙滩，无建筑。开发后：西部建度假村(15间客房)、东部建餐厅和接待处、中央保留森林、南北各建游泳区、码头伸入西海域、步行道连接各设施。

✍️ 满分范文

主体段 1

The two maps show the changes that occurred on an island following the development of tourist facilities.

简洁改写题目：following the development of tourist facilities。

主体段 2

Overall, the island was completely transformed from an untouched natural landscape into a developed holiday resort. While the central forest was preserved, new accommodation, dining, and recreational facilities were constructed along the coast, connected by a network of footpaths.

三个要素：①整体转变(untouched→resort) ②森林保留 ③新建设施类型(accommodation/dining/recreational)。用while连接保留与新建的对比——地图题中'unchanged'元素必须提及。

主体段 3

Before development, the island was entirely undeveloped, consisting of a forested central area surrounded by sandy beaches on all sides, with no infrastructure of any kind.

描述开发前状态。用entirely undeveloped/consisting of/with no infrastructure概括荒岛特征——简短但完整，为下段对比做基线。

主体段 4

After development, a resort complex comprising 15 accommodation units was constructed in the western part of the island. A restaurant was built in the east, with a reception area situated nearby. Two swimming areas were designated — one to the north and one to the south of the island. A pier was built extending into the sea on the western coast to allow boats to dock. Footpaths were laid to connect all the facilities, while the central forest was deliberately left intact, preserving the island's natural character.

按方位描述新建设施。'comprising 15 accommodation units'精确描述规模。用'situated nearby'/'to the north'/'to the south'展示方位。末句强调森林'left intact'——呼应概述段的保留信息。

📚 核心词汇

untouched (未开发的/原始的) · 替换natural ☆ resort complex (度假村建筑群) · 术语 ☆ designated (指定) · 替换made/created ☆ pier (码头) · 术语 ☆ intact (完好无损的) · 替换unchanged ☆ footpaths (步行道) · 替换paths ☆

🏆 高分句型

completely transformed from... into... → 描述事物发生根本性变化，常用被动语态强调结果。可替换为dramatically changed from... to... ☆

an untouched natural landscape → 强调原始未开发状态，形容词+名词构成简洁有力的描述。可替换为a pristine natural landscape ☆

no infrastructure of any kind → 用双重否定加强语气，强调完全没有设施。可替换为not a single facility ☆

comprising 15 accommodation units → 现在分词作状语，补充说明具体构成。可替换为consisting of 15 accommodation units ☆

extending into the sea → 现在分词短语作后置定语，描写空间延伸。可替换为stretching into the sea ☆

deliberately left intact → 过去分词短语作补语，突出有意保留的意图。可替换为intentionally preserved untouched ☆

preserving the island's natural character → 动名词短语表结果或伴随，强调对自然特色的维护。可替换为maintaining the island's natural essence ☆

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