大学校园发展 (1990-2025) - 智能英语陪练

📝 题目

The maps below show a university campus in 1990 and in 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

📊 图表内容说明

两幅地图对比大学校园发展。1990年：主教学楼、图书馆、两栋宿舍楼、一个小体育馆、一片空地。2025年：新增三栋宿舍楼、新建科学楼、体育馆扩建含游泳馆、图书馆扩建、空地改建为学生中心和食堂、新增环形校园路。

✍️ 满分范文

主体段 1

The maps illustrate the development of a university campus over a thirty-five-year period from 1990 to 2025.

改写题目，补充时间跨度。

主体段 2

Overall, the campus has expanded significantly, with new academic, residential, and recreational facilities added. The most notable changes include the construction of new dormitories, a science building, and a student centre, as well as the expansion of existing facilities.

两个要素：①扩展方向(academic/residential/recreational) ②新增设施类型+现有设施扩建。用as well as连接两类变化。

主体段 3

In 1990, the campus was relatively compact, consisting of a main academic building, a library, and two dormitory blocks arranged around a central path. A small sports hall was located to the south, and an area of open land remained undeveloped to the east.

描述1990年基线。用'relatively compact'概括规模。'arranged around a central path'描述空间布局——展现空间组织能力。末句指出空地——为下段建设做铺垫。

主体段 4

By 2025, three additional dormitory blocks had been constructed to the north of the existing ones. A new science building had been built to the east, replacing the open land. The sports hall had been expanded to include a swimming pool. The library had been extended with a new wing, and a student centre with a dining hall had been erected on the former open ground. A circular campus road had been added to connect all the buildings.

按方位描述新建和扩建。'replacing the open land'/'on the former open ground'呼应上段空地。'expanded to include a swimming pool'用to include展示扩建内容。末句新增道路连接——体现整体规划视角。

📚 核心词汇

compact (紧凑的) · 描述规模 ☆ dormitory blocks (宿舍楼) · 术语 ☆ erected (建成) · 替换built ☆ new wing (新侧翼) · 术语 ☆ circular (环形的) · 形状描述 ☆ undeveloped (未开发的) · 替换empty ☆

🏆 高分句型

expanded significantly → 概括变化程度，用副词修饰动词，简洁有力。可替换为enlarged dramatically、grew considerably。 ☆

the most notable changes include → 引出重点变化，后接具体项目，使段落层次清晰。可替换为key changes comprise、the main developments include。 ☆

arranged around a central path → 描述空间布局，用过去分词短语作状语，画面感强。可替换为organized around a central walkway。 ☆

additional dormitory blocks had been constructed → 使用过去完成时，强调动作发生在过去的过去，体现时间层次。可替换为new dormitory blocks were added。 ☆

expanded to include a swimming pool → 用expand to include表示范围扩大，后接新增设施，信息紧凑。可替换为was enlarged with a swimming pool。 ☆

extended with a new wing → 用被动语态说明建筑物扩展，避免主观主语，客观准确。可替换为was lengthened by adding a new wing。 ☆

a circular campus road had been added → 使用被动语态和过去完成时，突出新增道路在某一时间点已完成。可替换为a ring road was introduced。 ☆

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