📝 题目
The maps below show the road network of a city centre in 1995 and in 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
📊 图表内容说明
两幅地图对比城市路网变化。1995年:网格状路网、中央广场被道路环绕、南北向主干道穿城、东侧火车站、西侧老城区。2025年:主干道改为地下隧道、中央广场扩大为步行广场、新增环路绕城、老城区改为步行街、新增自行车道网络、火车站扩建含公交枢纽。
✍️ 满分范文
The maps illustrate changes to the road network of a city centre over a thirty-year period from 1995 to 2025.
改写题目,补充时间跨度。
Overall, the city centre has shifted towards a more pedestrian and cyclist-friendly model, with the main through-road redirected underground and several surface streets converted to pedestrian zones. A new ring road has been added to manage through-traffic.
三个要素:①转变方向(pedestrian/cyclist-friendly) ②核心变化(主干道入地/步行区/环路) ③环路目的(divert through-traffic)。'shifted towards'描述政策方向转变——比简单说'changed'更有分析深度。
In 1995, the city centre was organised in a grid pattern, with a main road running north to south through the middle. A central square was surrounded by roads on all sides. The railway station was located to the east, and the historic old town was situated to the west.
描述1995年基线。'organised in a grid pattern'描述路网结构——展现空间分析能力。'surrounded by roads on all sides'为下段广场扩大做铺垫。
By 2025, the main north-south road had been rerouted into an underground tunnel, allowing the central square to be expanded into a large pedestrian plaza. Several streets in the old town had been pedestrianised, and a network of cycle lanes had been added throughout the city centre. A new ring road had been constructed around the perimeter to divert through-traffic. The railway station had been expanded to include a bus terminal, creating an integrated transport hub.
描述2025年变化。'rerouted into an underground tunnel'——rerouted(改道)是精确的路网变化动词。'allowing the central square to be expanded'用分词表示因果——一个变化引发另一个变化。'creating an integrated transport hub'末句总结——合理推论。
📚 核心词汇
pedestrian-friendly (行人友好的)
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城市规划术语
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rerouted (改道)
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路网专用动词
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underground tunnel (地下隧道)
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术语
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pedestrianised (步行化)
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术语
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perimeter (周边)
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替换edge/border
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integrated transport hub (综合交通枢纽)
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术语
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🏆 高分句型
shifted towards a more pedestrian and cyclist-friendly model
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表趋势变化,引出整体方向。用shift towards比change更主动,搭配friendly model体现总结性。可替换:has moved toward a more walkable design.
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redirected underground
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表示改道地下的被动结构,突出道路被迁移。语法用过去分词作补语,简洁有力。可替换:diverted beneath the ground.
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converted to pedestrian zones
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表功能转变,常用于地图题描述区域改造。convert...to结构清晰,被动语态突显变化结果。可替换:turned into pedestrian-only areas.
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organised in a grid pattern
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描述布局特征,organised in...point体现系统性和静态分布。语法为被动语态+搭配。可替换:laid out on a grid system.
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surrounded by roads on all sides
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表示空间环绕关系,用surrounded by roads说明位置特点,适合地图方位描述。可替换:with roads encircling it.
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rerouted into an underground tunnel
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说明改线方向,reroute比redirect更正式,into指明最终去向,适合交通变化类。可替换:channeled through a tunnel.
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creating an integrated transport hub
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表结果和功能整合,现在分词作状语引出整体效益。hub一词提升专业度。可替换:forming a linked transport center.
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